My Dear Aster - Vol. 1 Ch. 5
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Damn, this is the second time you're saying she's a plain girl now, while it's clearly said in the first chapter, which should be laying the foundation of the story, that she is "exceptionally pretty, but lacking a remarkable record.".
What now, should I pitty her because she's plain, she's lucky to be with a beautiful guy ? Stop writing so badly ffs
Not to mention this guy who should be shunned by society for being a bastard (it's litteraly written in the settings) but recieved confessions from powerful and beautiful women of the empire ? It just makes no sense, except if author is trying to make us feel like mc is lucky to have such a prized good, wanted by many. That's stupid.
What now, should I pitty her because she's plain, she's lucky to be with a beautiful guy ? Stop writing so badly ffs
Not to mention this guy who should be shunned by society for being a bastard (it's litteraly written in the settings) but recieved confessions from powerful and beautiful women of the empire ? It just makes no sense, except if author is trying to make us feel like mc is lucky to have such a prized good, wanted by many. That's stupid.
