Thanks for uploading your work!
In the first few pages, I thought it was kind of too random and lacking cohesion, but by the end I was grapped and wanted to read more. My confusion in the beginning was probably mostly due to not knowing the different monster types except Penny.
Just one question: is there supposed to be another page after page 21? Because later in the Making Of it is said something about the donut and I don't understand if that was a theoretical other ending or if that should be in there.