Mythos: Cavern of Desires - Oneshot

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Thanks for uploading your work!

In the first few pages, I thought it was kind of too random and lacking cohesion, but by the end I was grapped and wanted to read more. My confusion in the beginning was probably mostly due to not knowing the different monster types except Penny.

Just one question: is there supposed to be another page after page 21? Because later in the Making Of it is said something about the donut and I don't understand if that was a theoretical other ending or if that should be in there.
 
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Thanks for uploading your work!

In the first few pages, I thought it was kind of too random and lacking cohesion, but by the end I was grapped and wanted to read more. My confusion in the beginning was probably mostly due to not knowing the different monster types except Penny.

Just one question: is there supposed to be another page after page 21? Because later in the Making Of it is said something about the donut and I don't understand if that was a theoretical other ending or if that should be in there.
Thank you so much for reading my work and YES the last page somehow went under my radar and skipped the upload. For now it should be updated with the last page, thank you so much for notifying me about that!
 

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