Nanahoshi to Tachibana - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Small Bread

[MangaDex]

 

[Suzukino]

No wonder his wife left.

 

[shirouzawa]

I have a theory that these girls are witches or fairyes

 

[AkiTooru]

On page 8, it should be "she and her father" instead of "her and her father"
On page 14, did you really need to split "especially"?
On page 39, the first bubble of the second panel has some strange dialogue, the sentence doesn't make sense.

 

[lazerus56]

No wonder she refused to even see him.