Nangseon Story

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4/10

Great art, women, boobs n great joke. Bad story, annoying fml, bad explanation, bad plot, cringe dialoge, dumb mc. The isekai plot are unnecessary its just to promote the Manhwa. The author are focus on art rather than story but its better than most Murim Manhua story.
 
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Why is the girl not there anymore...? Spare me this xianxia bs without little one! I was prepared to watch her grow, but she turned into a woman and unseen again. 3/10.
 
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Don't mind these comments, it's entertaining, the power-ups are satisfying af, the story is consistent.. from what I could gather at least since the TLs are shitty af...

The only things that suck about it is the translation, and there's a minor stupid af thing, "that the mc entered a novel?" but they don't focus on that thing, they say that line like twice in the whole show and its only in passing and doesn't hold any value.
So basically... the world is NOT a novel, mc did NOT transmigrate or w/e... the author tried to implement that overused plot and kinda removed that idea.
 
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really don't like stories where the formula is male = bad, female = good/neutral. Which is exactly what this is, mind you. That in itself has the potential to ruin any story for me. I like to see a good balance of characters in media, so it's a damn shame when every single male character is your stereotypical greedy scumbag, while every female character is an ally or neutral to the main character.

A good example is the part that I just got to. The 'main character' of the story that the real main character is in appeared, they had a golden opportunity to make him a uniquely interesting and vital character to the plot. Nah, he immediately becomes an idiot with overexaggerated, almost comical evil facial expressions the second he thinks he smells treasure on the real main character. A damn shame, is what it is.

Also, that whole plotline with the little girl had so much potential. I wasn't really comfortable with the whole child marriage thing but it was easily ignored due to the main character not really taking it seriously as, like I said, she was a child.

After they were separated, I lost a little enthusiasm for the story but I quickly regained it as I thought about the possibilities that'd come from such a tragic ending to their brief meeting. She'd be really messed up over his death, we'd get to see both the main character and her grow separately as time passes, it could even really delve deep into the drama and make the two characters have brief encounters as she grew up, their paths only briefly intersecting as time passes but neither would realize who the other was until they finally meet up in a oh-so-dramatic reunion.

Nah, the author said screw that. Four year time skip, she's an adult now. Realizing how much potential the story of their journey had compared to the story we actually got is devastating.
 

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