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GridLite Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 28, 2019 Messages 2,903 Apr 27, 2024 #2 what a weird transition. there's no "the next day" or "after the battle" but they literally just jumped to the next competition after that entrapment operation.
what a weird transition. there's no "the next day" or "after the battle" but they literally just jumped to the next competition after that entrapment operation.
M marcelwait Joined Nov 4, 2024 Messages 1 Nov 4, 2024 #3 The story has potential, however is crippled by bad writing.
TheronHunter Active member Joined Nov 24, 2024 Messages 123 Saturday at 4:25 PM #4 so.. what? was the trap useless? or did only the succubus and that flame king escape? Last edited: Saturday at 4:38 PM