comparing the last two chapters to the official raw, biscuits doing an OK job overall. I'd have personally gone with "it's fine, it's slow on weekdays" but that's technically less accurate and probably harder to fit into the space available.
I'd have gone with something like "It's ok. It was the middle of the week, anyway."
It's certainly not the worst work I've seen lately. But the sheer inconsistency of the TL isn't helping either. Sometimes it's little nitpicks like this, where maybe the exact message wouldn't be practical anyway, and other times, we're outright changing relationship dynamics for no fucking reason at all . Remember when the TL made him say he "Can't live without (Petting) Mii-chan", when "Petting" wasn't even implied? I find that if the line has some implication for the main pair, the TL practically chucks the original message.
If it were always just this, I'd almost feel like an asshole for bringing it up every time. Almost.