Neko to Ryuu - Vol. 3 Ch. 11 - Creatures of the Forest Field Guide

[MangaDex]

 

[Lamasis]

I mean thanks for the translation, but could you at least proofread it?

 

[HDMI1]

Those are some tiny wings on the wasps.

 

[DMGLatias]

I mean thanks for the translation, but could you at least proofread it?

I just fix the translation a little bit but there may still have mistake. Can you and everyone help me to find it?

 

[riflow]

It's so sweet how much he's helping to raise every cat. I hope he can reunited with his mama sometime.

 

[Lamasis]

I just fix the translation a little bit but there may still have mistake. Can you and everyone help me to find it?

On page 13 panel 3 the hornets or bees are called scorpion wasp, on page 14 panel 5 they are calledskull hornet.
Page 14 panel 4, "When this will end?" should be "When will this end?"
Page 15 panel 3, the sentence with 2 yours, remove the first one.
Page 17 panel 2, I think that "Some cats like eating them." would be better. Same panel Dad and mom and not Dad, Mom's.

Not going to bother with punctuation, I'm really bad at that.

 

[DMGLatias]

It's so sweet how much he's helping to raise every cat. I hope he can reunited with his mama sometime.

he will







spoil: he will reunite with his brother/sister and father too