tl;dr It's shit. makes me realize that if this is considered professional then we should all be writers cause this is pure shit
read through it so you don't have too. I don't know what the source material is like, but this is shit. interesting premise, but the it turns what would be 1 chapter into 6. I've seen adaptions milk the plot for chapter numbers, but never to this degree. I'm pretty sure some chapters are literally one line of actual content spread out along the chapter with nothing to fill in the blanks. they just repeat the same points over and over and over and over to fill in page count. It's like a dragon ball fight except with every single idea that is had, and filled in with generic fantasy images.
As you can imagine, nothing else is good either. if anything was good, it would have been used to fill in the blanks. mc is generic gamer mc, except not "I'm ten steps ahead of you" op which somehow makes it worse than if he was. bland as a brick, not much to say positive or negative. art is generic fantasy art, nothing to write home about. plot seemed somewhat interesting at first, even knowing this would be a classic knows everything that will happen harem power fantasy., except the pacing is so bad that the plot is just never going to happen. From what I can tell so far it is going to be just as shit. The characters you say? I find more flavor in wonder bread. it's like looking at the archetypes of characters, hard to even call them human.
In short, you shouldn't read this. Unless of course you want to torture someone and tell them "don't worry! It gets better by chapter (whatever chapter you feel they would give up by)!". Even among a sea of shitty harem fantasy/game stories, this one sinks.
Treasure the time you have on this earth and read a porno instead
