Nightmare World - Ch. 2

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Translation seems good, but there's a few typos and I don't even know what is with the random boxes every so often. You may also want to start using png files to reduce compression and use the original image file size from the raws. The typesetting can also be improved a lot. Keep up the good work!
 
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@0110111_01100111 Thx for the feedback, i kinda F'd up with chapter 02, found higher quality raws for the rest of the chapters + fixed the box issue. Prob will update chapter 2 with better quality as well!
 
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is it my internet or the image is indeed grainy??
yeap, maybe use web publishing setting on photoshop when saving to keep the file size smol while maintaining the quality (i assume you haven't, and i assume you use photoshop, and i am sorry for making so much assumption).
 
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YOshi yosh.
THe manhua seems good, gotta work that typo and presentation, quality of image etc ^^ it will make a big difference!
The translation is quite good. Gotta be sure you double check for orthograph and grammar as many people will get thrown off on this.
If you can lvl up those points , im pretty sure this could bring you some donations.
Enjoy ! and thanks !
 
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I actually like all the random rotoscoped backgrounds. It reminds me of inuyashiki. Still unusual enough to be novel without distracting from the storytelling.
 

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