Nobara to Pretender

[MangaDex]

 

[serupento]

Surprisingly rough. I tend to read very short series, usually just one volume, so two volume series often feel more spread out and relaxed. This still managed to feel incredibly rushed and stilted. A not insignificant part was the scanlator's overly-literal translation coming off as stiff, but the story and pacing were also very immature. It felt like the author wanted the seme to come off as more of a bad boy but he was defanged pretty much immediately. On top of it all, it looks like overly-well-adjusted therapy vomit dialogue has broken out of webtoons and into the realm of physical manga.

 

[muzikima]

I hope you can continue translating this series! Houuu