Ochikobore Eji Minarai no Shounen. (Jitsu wa) Saikyou Saiaku no Asashin. - Ch. 4

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looking at the cover again

im starting to think that that dancer is involved in the death of the outlander
right? at first I thought she was part of the night dwellers but I guess not. maybe she uses her hair pins on smiths she like?
 
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I had to check that this really had a translator and a proofreader and wasn't just mtl or AI slop, because there appear to be numerous mistakes regarding the pronouns and relationships during the talk on pages 3 and 4.

"[...]your brother is actually kind of cute." Both the protagonist's reaction and the continuation on the next page make it clear that it's Nisha talking, so it should be "my brother".

"You're even harsher than I am." makes little sense in context as he may be rather open about his bad character later in the chapter, but he hasn't been harsh at any point in this conversation. He's probably meaning "You're even harsher than mom is." if that is a possible translation.

"Who did she take after, I wonder?" He, not she, as they were talking about the male protagonist.

I'm leaving out the "She has a right to choose too, you know..." on page 3 because I can't make any sense of that one in any context imaginable here.

This post is coming with the caveat that I have not seen, nor can I translate the RAWs and only went by what was presented here and how it would make sense to me.
 
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Considering the inconsistency and the occasional clear errors. I'm assuming it's either MTL or lack a proofreader. Either way who knows. It's at least still comprehensible enough and I'm not here to be a choosing beggar.

RIP that guy. Like the MC pointing out, he had no backup. When tackling a criminal lord, clearly you need something to guard your back because nobody can stay awake 24/7 no matter how strong they are to keep themselves safe from being killed in their sleep.

I doubt his death will lead to a request for an assassination like we saw in chapter 1. Aside from the dancer's infatuation, it's more of a sudden one night fling thing so it's unlikely she'll decide to follow some weird rumored mythological urban story about invincible assassins just for a passing fancy.
 
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Considering the inconsistency and the occasional clear errors. I'm assuming it's either MTL or lack a proofreader. Either way who knows. It's at least still comprehensible enough and I'm not here to be a choosing beggar.

RIP that guy. Like the MC pointing out, he had no backup. When tackling a criminal lord, clearly you need something to guard your back because nobody can stay awake 24/7 no matter how strong they are to keep themselves safe from being killed in their sleep.

I doubt his death will lead to a request for an assassination like we saw in chapter 1. Aside from the dancer's infatuation, it's more of a sudden one night fling thing so it's unlikely she'll decide to follow some weird rumored mythological urban story about invincible assassins just for a passing fancy.
The MC can tell the difference between Hiluluk and Haikur by glance which is completely right about that.

Hiluluk is dangerous because he is very skillful yet he doesnt tried to resort the violence as long as the person can fulfill his request and he will leave them alone. Haikur on the other hand is skillful BUT he is also too stupid to realize that he should not involved with something that was not his business in 1st place and he paid it with his own life.

Any person who get used to live in darkness have hard time to stay bright in surface and MC is the definition of it. He pretend to be weak swordman but in reality he is way too strong to live as a Night dweller and he actually kinda hated it due doing coin-sided job is not his forte.
 
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I had to check that this really had a translator and a proofreader and wasn't just mtl or AI slop, because there appear to be numerous mistakes regarding the pronouns and relationships during the talk on pages 3 and 4.

"[...]your brother is actually kind of cute." Both the protagonist's reaction and the continuation on the next page make it clear that it's Nisha talking, so it should be "my brother".

"You're even harsher than I am." makes little sense in context as he may be rather open about his bad character later in the chapter, but he hasn't been harsh at any point in this conversation. He's probably meaning "You're even harsher than mom is." if that is a possible translation.

"Who did she take after, I wonder?" He, not she, as they were talking about the male protagonist.

I'm leaving out the "She has a right to choose too, you know..." on page 3 because I can't make any sense of that one in any context imaginable here.

This post is coming with the caveat that I have not seen, nor can I translate the RAWs and only went by what was presented here and how it would make sense to me.
It's unedited MTL, the group members just slap their names on it and beg for donations.
As a general rule of thumb, if there's a "pls gib mone" page anywhere in the release, it's a group that doesn't speak English or Japanese and is simply hoping that they can get money from stupid people.
 

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