Ohayou Toka Oyasumi Toka - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Welcome Back

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when u already getting used to be alone doing whatever u like and suddenly u have to control ur emotion toward ur new companion..

damn hard.
 
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This guys a douche. Taking ur temper out on other's especially vulnerable kids is the sign of a manchild
 
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I like the MC a lot I feel him "l love quite place also" but I can get the feel of the girls too "with home and memorise I like to treauser it" ... He used to live so differently and now suddenly need to changed his way of life so he get confused and changed the way of his thinking along the way.
While the girls struggling for losing thier home. I expected a good story here.
 
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I haven't read such a heavily editored story in a very long time now. The motif of "HOME, MEMORIES, FEELINGZ, PEOPLEZ" was laid out so bluntly and so thickly, that even a B-rated movie from the 90s wouldn't hammer-in those same subjects over and over again so relentlessly. It'd totally be a 90s thing, though, if the MC would to flip through the radio, and every station would blabber about home-sickness. These characters never feel like actual people, but more like a walking trope or a metaphor waiting to complete.

Also, the children are way too intimate. They're a tad TOO cute, aren't they? It's an odd thing to say, but the MC doesn't even have to earn their intimacy, they just vomit it all over him. It comes across as cheap.
There, I'm done. That's all I had to fart on this thing.
 
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@Solipsist Yeah, this has felt exceedingly scripted so far. Everything that happens at work or at home happens for a reason to serve the other side, in perfect balance. He also has worked already for a while, no doubt, yet his customer service psychology skills seemed to be at level 1 for some weird reason, so that he could take the first rudimentary steps when the story began.

I suppose the children had to be energetic and lovable in this manner to be able to affect the family hating MC. They appear artificial, however, like you said. The eldest one is a bit better, though you'd think she would be more stressed by the situation where she feels responsible for the squirts, despite being nothing but a school kid herself. I suppose if she knew money wouldn't be a problem at all, it could help a lot to make her behave like she did. She would just feel uneasy about being able to handle the official stuff, commucating with strangers, and so forth, but she would know they wouldn't starve or anything.
 
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@Shuzuchi Not trying to defend his actions but having something completely rekt your status quo life with no warning whatsoever. Not everyone is that adaptable. So he's understandable in his actions of lashing out or being annoyed.
 
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God. The older sister is fine, but the twins... are... very loud, and chaotic. It seems difficult to have good rest with them around.
 

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