This is just the first chapter, don't get baited. Panty showing is definitely not on the level of eroticaI feel like it's going to change from "suggestive" to "erotica"
I forgot to change that lol, it should be fixed now. Thank you for your adviceWell, I can appreciate the effort. There were a couple rough spots, sure, but you're already self-aware about that so I won't harp you on that.
The one that really stuck out to me was about her boobs "growing back;" which probably should be "grew again." That would mean simply going from one size to a larger size, while "growing back" would imply that they were once a larger size, then shrank down, then became larger again.