It'd be really funny if all the chapters after this with either of them as the viewpoint character had a black crescent overlay on them to imply that the image actually did burn into their retinas and blind them in those areas when they looked at the eclipse.
Reading this got me like ughhhh, I started this but its not even getting that good, it dropped its quality after the school festival tbh. Im still gonna finish it though thx for thr tl