Ore no Imouto ga Saikou no Okazudatta - Vol. 1 Ch. 9

[DracoSafarius]

Alright, I'm going to spoil a ton stuff up to chapter 46 of the WN; save you all the torture. Ask if you need more:

Spoiler: It's a lot, so strap in

Haruka is a cancer on this story. Everything goes back to her, despite the fact that she's barely present. The trip is announced in chapter 13. For the next 30+ chapters, it, and Haruka, keep getting hyped up more and more. If there's a mystery, a secret, or some piece of missing information, chances are good that it goes back to Haruka.

I won't beat around the bush any further: Haruka and Miyu are lezzing it up on the trip. Haruka is a high-end lolita fashion model. Miyu is selling herself to Haruka so Haruka will lend (not give) her some lolita outfits, and give her money to make her own. The way the manga had built it up, you'd think they were doing travelling sex shows for rich lesbians, or doing gangbangs. She masturbates to herself (With a vibrator, and a full-body mirror) in these dresses at home, and keeps a physical album of the lesbian stuff she did on the trip in her closet, along with the lolita clothes. The album, and the fetish for herself in lolita clothes are a source of shame, and embarassment and tucked away for now. Almost all of this happens off screen, save for a single description of Miyu getting off to herself. The trip comes, and we're stuck with MC's POV back home, while the FMC goes off to do porn things away from the audience in a PORN novel. This "secret" is, by far, the second or third most vanilla thing to happen in this story, so I don't know why all the fucking mystery just to tell us after the fact.
Miyu is also scared of being caught in Lolita clothes in general because her parents and teacher told her she's seducing her classmates in the third grade, and was told to stop wearing them.

TL;DR: The trip was relatively vanilla lez stuff, happened off screen, and wasn't worth the buildup. Haruka is Miyu's benefactor on top of being friends, so she's extra protective/tolerant. Miyu gets off to herself in lolita outfits, so she sleeps with Haruka to get paid, and borrow outfits. EDIT: If more happens on the trip, we haven't found out yet.



Miyu is not nearly this stoic in the Web Novel. This goes for her reaction to drinking cum for the first time too. Manga makes it look like she's used to all this, but she was shocked, and MC believed it was her first time ever due to the fact that she was so uncomposed despite offering herself like that.

Miyu has androphobia. She's ok with men in theory, but the moment they approach her, she's immediately turned off, no matter how attractive (explicitly stated that attractiveness is a turn-off, but this may just be rationalization). She's been confessed to by men and women. She thought she might be a lesbian, but she never found one she liked (Though she doesn't mind being touched by them in that way). Eventually got her harsh attitude after rejecting so many people. Miyu has never been with another man, and we personally saw the first time she drank cum. The reason she decided to start helping is because her brother, unlike all other men, didn't disgust her, despite the fact that she caught him masturbating, furiously, to a character with her name; she wanted to explore this new thing, and see what she'd be ok with.

The cum catching was done on a whim. She let the intrusive thoughts win once, and after realizing she's not bothered by it, and is actually only turned on by close relatives, she kept going (In for a penny, in for a pound). The lack of blowjob (among other things) was her trying to wrestle with the confused feelings. She's very much cognizant of the fact that it's her brother she'd doing this all with, and she's like to maintain some modicum of "Ew, no. I'm not going to suck my actual brother's dick!". Naturally, the acts escalate, sometimes by accident, sometimes deliberately, and she reluctantly loses her inhibitions.

TL;DR: Miyu is only into family, and hates attractive men. MC fits the bill to be her lover, and he's the only guy she's been with. Her boundaries are inconsistent because she's confused herself. She's bothered by her lack of resistance to doing more with MC, so she resists.

I went through over one million characters of chicken scratch with some shitty MTL help to get to this. Be grateful.

Even with the last bit on the text wall this sounds awful

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Even with the last bit on the text wall this sounds awful

The last bit on the text wall? The TL;DR?

 

[DracoSafarius]

The last bit on the text wall? The TL;DR?

Meant the specific part about the sister, since it's what the series was moving towards, but even if it gets where it was implying the way there just sounds awful.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Meant the specific part about the sister, since it's what the series was moving towards, but even if it gets where it was implying the way there just sounds awful.

I will say, if you couldn't care less about the mysteries, then this is some Grade A porn. The author embraces the trashiness of his setting and throws everything at the wall. But if you want to get answers.... yeah, a sudden info dump halfway through the series, triggered by a coincidence, instead building up to it organically with all those chapters you made to supposedly try solving the mysteries you set up at the start? Yeah, no.

Not to mention THE TRIP, which is my eternal gripe with this stupid story, and the entire reason I even read it. It came, it went, we didn't see anything, and we STILL haven't answered all the questions after the post-trip exposition. The author set up EVEN MORE than what I had pointed out, but this Spoilers were getting long, and unfocused.

 

[omimon]

I will say, if you couldn't care less about the mysteries, then this is some Grade A porn. The author embraces the trashiness of his setting and throws everything at the wall. But if you want to get answers.... yeah, a sudden info dump halfway through the series, triggered by a coincidence, instead building up to it organically with all those chapters you made to supposedly try solving the mysteries you set up at the start? Yeah, no.

Not to mention THE TRIP, which is my eternal gripe with this stupid story, and the entire reason I even read it. It came, it went, we didn't see anything, and we STILL haven't answered all the questions after the post-trip exposition. The author set up EVEN MORE than what I had pointed out, but this Spoilers were getting long, and unfocused.

I'm curious, I assume at this point you've read up to the most recent chapter of the WN since there isn't exactly a lot of chapters, why do you only talk about THE TRIP like its some sort of nexus to the story? I can assure you that the only thing everyone here cares about is if MC and his sister fucks and the lead up to it. I only know bit and pieces of the story so what I want to ask is what is the impetus that causes them to finally just said fuck it, let's finally do the deed.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

I'm curious, I assume at this point you've read up to the most recent chapter of the WN since there isn't exactly a lot of chapters, why do you only talk about THE TRIP like its some sort of nexus to the story? I can assure you that the only thing everyone here cares about is if MC and his sister fucks and the lead up to it. I only know bit and pieces of the story so what I want to ask is what is the impetus that causes them to finally just said fuck it, let's finally do the deed.

I've only read up to chapter 46-47 out of 98 (so far). And the reason I talk about THE TRIP is twofold:

1) It personally interested me. At first I figured it had something to do with Miyu's condition, but the Manga didn't elaborate.

2) The story itself keeps coming back to it. I can't stress enough, that at least once every couple of chapters, the story actually brings up a new question about Miyu, her condition, her relationship with Haruka, where she gets the large amount of pocket money, why she's so tolerant/protective with Haruka, what Haruka does, where they go, WHO THE WOMAN SPONSORING THE TRIP IS (Because Haruka herself isn't the sponsor, it's some woman she knows. She provides a driver, and everything, and then Miyu mentions rich weirdos on top of it all), spends several chapters sitting MC down, asking every girl Miyu's ever associated with about all these things, only to be met with "I don't know", or "You'll find out", or Miyu, AT BEST, giving short, curt, vague answers, then following up with "Stop asking questions already", among MANY OTHER QUESTIONS AND INCIDENTS, and topping it all off with MC, as some kind of stand-in for the author's self-congratulatory masturbation session, telling himself (really the audience) what a great fucking mystery this all is, and how he'd love to resolve it.

The trip itself was being sold as if it will be a ground-shattering revelation that will answer every question you've had about the setting, and a shit ton of the new ones you're being forced to ask. So you'll have to forgive me if I, after crawling through almost one MILLION characters, losing days of sleep, losing my appetite, and nearly destroying my dick, am more than A LITTLE FUCKING UPSET that the moment the trip comes, we don't actually see what happens, and we get a comparatively vanilla reveal at the end that doesn't answer all the questions the author raised, AND THEN RAISES MORE. Now my only hope is that the author actually goes back and actually pays off this thing after setting it up to hell and back

P.S.:

I can assure you that the only thing everyone here cares about is if MC and his sister fucks and the lead up to it

I didn't realize I was hired to report on what you specifically felt was important about the story. So when's the check coming in? It was quite a hard time getting all of this together for you, boss.

 

[guyperson1232451]

The site I've been reading on has up to chapter 98, and not only has the MC and Miyu had sex at this point, they are pretty okay with the relationship in general. Also, at one point before they start fucking, Miyu basically forced the MC to rape her friend Yuka. On page 8 of chapter 8 here, Miyu punishes Yuka for some stuff she did by beating her up in a short, comedic panel. But in the novel, the punishment is a long scene of Yuka being tied up in a box with her cooch sticking out while MC fucks her, going through like 6 condoms, as he feels guilty the whole time. It's very graphic and detailed. Honestly, even with this manga being as raunchy as it is, the absolute pornography that is the novel makes this shit look like Yotsuba&.

 

[guyperson1232451]

Also idk if links are allowed but here is the site (I used a page translation extension to read it):
https://syosetu.org/novel/264928/

 

[Dorraj]

Listen, I know no one should expect much from this Manga but... That's the ending? That was the most lackluster ending to something I've ever read. Not a single shred of closure or anything. Jesus lmao

 

[Dorraj]

I will say, if you couldn't care less about the mysteries, then this is some Grade A porn. The author embraces the trashiness of his setting and throws everything at the wall. But if you want to get answers.... yeah, a sudden info dump halfway through the series, triggered by a coincidence, instead building up to it organically with all those chapters you made to supposedly try solving the mysteries you set up at the start? Yeah, no.

Not to mention THE TRIP, which is my eternal gripe with this stupid story, and the entire reason I even read it. It came, it went, we didn't see anything, and we STILL haven't answered all the questions after the post-trip exposition. The author set up EVEN MORE than what I had pointed out, but this Spoilers were getting long, and unfocused.

Some decently written pronography with a poorly written mystery isn't worth going through some shitty translation for, that's for sure. It sounds somewhat interesting, but the lack of a good translation + the fact that LN/WN sites aren't as well put together and/or good on mobile like, for example, MD is (or tachiyomi and forks) just makes LNs/WNs a no go for me. Oh well

 

[Ladmxt]

That doesn't come for a LONG time.

im actually pissed. lmaoooo all those edging with a bj we even barely see and introducing other girls and we get nothing. brub fuck im hoping for a spinoff where that dude just dogs everyone.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

The site I've been reading on has up to chapter 98, and not only has the MC and Miyu had sex at this point, they are pretty okay with the relationship in general. Also, at one point before they start fucking, Miyu basically forced the MC to rape her friend Yuka. On page 8 of chapter 8 here, Miyu punishes Yuka for some stuff she did by beating her up in a short, comedic panel. But in the novel, the punishment is a long scene of Yuka being tied up in a box with her cooch sticking out while MC fucks her, going through like 6 condoms, as he feels guilty the whole time. It's very graphic and detailed. Honestly, even with this manga being as raunchy as it is, the absolute pornography that is the novel makes this shit look like Yotsuba&.

You're confusing two incidents here. The scene in chapter 8 of the manga is Yuka being tied up to the bed, then MC being told to cum directly on her vagina. MC was worried about the risk of pregnancy, but it turns out there was a cellophane layer between them. Then she was made to eat his cum. You're thinking of the second incident, where she took naked pictures of Haruka and Miyu, and was using them to blackmail both the girls, so Miyu made her think she was being gangraped. If you think about it, Yuka always just gets tied up off-screen, for some reason. I find it annoying; like the author can't think of a logical way it would happen, so he insists we just accept it

But never mind that. Do they ever come back to THE TRIP?!

 

[kingdedede]

garbage

 

[_Hibiki_]

Alright, I'm going to spoil a ton stuff up to chapter 46 of the WN; save you all the torture. Ask if you need more:

Spoiler: It's a lot, so strap in

Haruka is a cancer on this story. Everything goes back to her, despite the fact that she's barely present. The trip is announced in chapter 13. For the next 30+ chapters, it, and Haruka, keep getting hyped up more and more. If there's a mystery, a secret, or some piece of missing information, chances are good that it goes back to Haruka.

I won't beat around the bush any further: Haruka and Miyu are lezzing it up on the trip. Haruka is a high-end lolita fashion model. Miyu is selling herself to Haruka so Haruka will lend (not give) her some lolita outfits, and give her money to make her own. The way the manga had built it up, you'd think they were doing travelling sex shows for rich lesbians, or doing gangbangs. She masturbates to herself (With a vibrator, and a full-body mirror) in these dresses at home, and keeps a physical album of the lesbian stuff she did on the trip in her closet, along with the lolita clothes. The album, and the fetish for herself in lolita clothes are a source of shame, and embarassment and tucked away for now. Almost all of this happens off screen, save for a single description of Miyu getting off to herself. The trip comes, and we're stuck with MC's POV back home, while the FMC goes off to do porn things away from the audience in a PORN novel. This "secret" is, by far, the second or third most vanilla thing to happen in this story, so I don't know why all the fucking mystery just to tell us after the fact.
Miyu is also scared of being caught in Lolita clothes in general because her parents and teacher told her she's seducing her classmates in the third grade, and was told to stop wearing them.

TL;DR: The trip was relatively vanilla lez stuff, happened off screen, and wasn't worth the buildup. Haruka is Miyu's benefactor on top of being friends, so she's extra protective/tolerant. Miyu gets off to herself in lolita outfits, so she sleeps with Haruka to get paid, and borrow outfits. EDIT: If more happens on the trip, we haven't found out yet.



Miyu is not nearly this stoic in the Web Novel. This goes for her reaction to drinking cum for the first time too. Manga makes it look like she's used to all this, but she was shocked, and MC believed it was her first time ever due to the fact that she was so uncomposed despite offering herself like that.

Miyu has androphobia. She's ok with men in theory, but the moment they approach her, she's immediately turned off, no matter how attractive (explicitly stated that attractiveness is a turn-off, but this may just be rationalization). She's been confessed to by men and women. She thought she might be a lesbian, but she never found one she liked (Though she doesn't mind being touched by them in that way). Eventually got her harsh attitude after rejecting so many people. Miyu has never been with another man, and we personally saw the first time she drank cum. The reason she decided to start helping is because her brother, unlike all other men, didn't disgust her, despite the fact that she caught him masturbating, furiously, to a character with her name; she wanted to explore this new thing, and see what she'd be ok with.

The cum catching was done on a whim. She let the intrusive thoughts win once, and after realizing she's not bothered by it, and is actually only turned on by close relatives, she kept going (In for a penny, in for a pound). The lack of blowjob (among other things) was her trying to wrestle with the confused feelings. She's very much cognizant of the fact that it's her brother she'd doing this all with, and she's like to maintain some modicum of "Ew, no. I'm not going to suck my actual brother's dick!". Naturally, the acts escalate, sometimes by accident, sometimes deliberately, and she reluctantly loses her inhibitions.

TL;DR: Miyu is only into family, and hates attractive men. MC fits the bill to be her lover, and he's the only guy she's been with. Her boundaries are inconsistent because she's confused herself. She's bothered by her lack of resistance to doing more with MC, so she resists.

I went through over one million characters of chicken scratch with some shitty MTL help to get to this. Be grateful.

I'm going be completely honest, I'm a garbage man.

I've read and watch many harem isekai and now I've moved to trash erotic WN/LN and manga.

So with all of respect to your suffering, please tell me where I can consume this trash?

Is it available in Webnovel.com or some other site?

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

I'm going be completely honest, I'm a garbage man.

I've read and watch many harem isekai and now I've moved to trash erotic WN/LN and manga.

So with all of respect to your suffering, please tell me where I can consume this trash?

Is it available in Webnovel.com or some other site?

https://syosetu.org/novel/264928/

Brother, if you keep reading past 46, and you find out more about THE FUCKING TRIP, please tell me. I've literally lost sleep, my appetite, and nearly lost my dick just getting to where I did. I don't think I have another burst in me just to hope the author actually resolves that plot point. If it's little tidbits fed over chapters, I'll settle for just knowing what chapters they all get brought up in. If there's a full-on flashback, just tell me that, and I'll be happy.

This is an entirely serious request. I'm begging you, man. It's never even been about the porn; that's just been the unfortunate roadblock standing between me and the answers I've been looking for.

 

[GnomoHerege]

Does anyone know any similar work? LN or Manga, preferably without bad development like this, and with decent art

 

[Wolvenworks]

Wait what that’s it?

Then what’s the whole damn point of this story then?
Even manhua writers can write better stories than that.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Wait what that’s it?

Then what’s the whole damn point of this story then?
Even manhua writers can write better stories than that.

The point is to advertise the LN/WN; spoilers for which, you'd see on Page 2 of this thread.

 

[Mist221322]

that's how you are going to end it? must have just been axed.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

that's how you are going to end it? must have just been axed.

Ad, not axe. Spoilers on page 2 here.