Osananajimi no Mama ja Iya? - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[powerneed]

I was worried it was gonna be ntr for a sec his father married his childhood friend or something

 

[megumon]

drawings look kinda blurry

 

[Kevadu]

wat

 

[4V29LN0n]

Japan was a mistake.

 

[Binbin]

Where is this guy's real mom anyway?

 

[Yourself]

Fun premise. However please use a different font and place your text in the middle. Here's a bunch of ones you can use: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/2ea3lb37ef2tdql/AACRCpP1lJgL10_SZJlMyRcZa?dl=0

Gambatte!

 

[dokidoki]

inb4 the series ends with papa marrying her and she actually becomes his mama for real LMAO

 

[Zblurth]

And that was the questionable click of the day

 

[RoadMovieToBerlin]

@Yourself

While I appreciate the massive font list you just introduced into my life, may I ask, why shouldn't I use my current font? And can you clarify what you mean by "put the text in the middle" because it is centered,

I'm not calling you out or anything, I legitimately want to improve, thanks!

 

[Hijinx]

I thought this was gonna be another Mama wa Doukyuusei for a second. Turns out this one trades drama for humor.

 

[marianolinx]

Sonzoned

 

[SanitaryCockroach]

Ara ara?

 

[Yourself]

@RoadMovieToBerlin Here's a rough example of what's more or less the standard.

The current font is a bit hard to read on mobile and leaves a bit too much white space. Also, try to center it with the individual text box itself like:

Spoiler

Again rough example but you get the idea.

Try asking a pro typesetter like @Xunder for more in-depth advice. Great job for your first work though.

 

[karanga]

another cuck mc

 

[Delete_me_]

@karanga pretty much

@dokidoki That would be hilarious, but also a blacklisting of the author

 

[Echonic]

Holy shit my child hood friend exactly like this when I was a child, when he heard I didn't have a father he was completely ecstatic when I accepted his offer for him to take that role.. but it got awkward as hell later on. This is really nostalgic, while it definitely wasn't as cute as this I see a lot of similarity's.

 

[RoadMovieToBerlin]

@Yourself

Thank you for your detailed response with examples! I'll do my best! I'll ask @Xunder at some point, but I don't want them wasting too much time if it's a problem, why are the nicest communities always the ones you don't expect?

 

[Swain123]

https://mangadex.org/title/22281/misoshiru-de-kanpai
There's already a manga like this, if anyone wants it. Way less ara ara, but same premise: childhood friend wants to be mc's mom.

 

[Ryrie]

It's like Misoshiru de Kanpai without the Miso