Paladin

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@Wordsmith Actually, if you go to the Egscans site, they have it. They are the ones who originally translated it, and it is still uploaded there (checked before responding to you).
 
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This is an example of when subverting expectations goes horribly wrong. Ryu ki-woon is an excellent writer as we've seen with his other work "Gosu". But in this manhwa, the story and execution falls apart because of just one mistake. It feels as if there's no main character. No matter how good Ryu is at execution, the story has no solid foundation if there is no main character, and no main motivation/goal to keep readers interested.
 
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You are right. I got 5 chapters in, and was like "wut?" Is this the story of the princess, the knight woman, the guy in the prison? Is this about finding a dragon/palidin. Couldn't follow at all.
Have been binging lots of manga manhwa and i finnaly figured out what makes me drop them. too long to find it's stride. Many don't even have a mini plot arc to start before getting to the meat.
 
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This manhwa has three different arcs where the supposed main character acts as a secondary. It focuses on the story of the different planets' kingdoms/duchies. The how and why of the pacing is only revealed at the end of the third story. If you like tight endings where everything is explained, this is not your story.
 

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