Pansuto - Vol. 9 Ch. 76 - The Weight of Love

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This series' greatest weakness is that it's not porn. I'm all for these erotic scenes, but the story, especially early on, really resorts to doing pretty explicit sex stuff out in the open, then censoring it all in a very confusing (and unsatisfying) manner. Especially that pixel blur from the pool scene god knows how many chapters ago. I often find myself needing to double back to find out what exactly went on more often than I'd like.

EDIT: Just realized the story did it again. She was masturbating, and all we got was the tip of her hand, slightly sweaty, between her legs, and a shot of her lips in the next page. Meanwhile, I only notice on a second reading.
 
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First unexpected translation in my follows for the year goes to this. Appreciate it, and I thought the translation was pretty good bro.
 
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Hey, I think you did great with the translation, but my question for you is how were you able to translate, did you use a specific tool, out of curiosity I tried to translate an image from the raws of ch. 77 myself, and I got "Ming Ming Heaven" I shit you not lmao
 
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Ty for the chapter, it was very nice....it shows you put the effort even tho it was the first time, so kudos to you @aeslrh

This series' greatest weakness is that it's not porn. I'm all for these erotic scenes, but the story, especially early on, really resorts to doing pretty explicit sex stuff out in the open, then censoring it all in a very confusing (and unsatisfying) manner. Especially that pixel blur from the pool scene god knows how many chapters ago. I often find myself needing to double back to find out what exactly went on more often than I'd like.

EDIT: Just realized the story did it again. She was masturbating, and all we got was the tip of her hand, slightly sweaty, between her legs, and a shot of her lips in the next page. Meanwhile, I only notice on a second reading.
Tbh, I feel the opposite: in the beginning (I'm so tempted to do the meme) we had Kaguya mildly teasing Daichi and him ending masturbating during night. Now we have actual porn....sure, there's no nudity and actual sex, but Kaguya made Daichi ejaculate multiple times with the intention of doing it. I feel that's more than just erotica
About the pool censoring...that was chapter 53 and I don't seem to remember censoring his fluids after that, so I guess it was like a sort of comic relief.

But I don't understand the last part: "all we got"....we never had anything else other than a "tease", never a full shot of nude genitals. It took you a second reading to realize she touched herself?
 
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He bones the teacher in the end. Did some anal too a believe. I'm sure the author did it to apologize for the passed works that ended in blue balls.
 
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Tbh, I feel the opposite: in the beginning (I'm so tempted to do the meme) we had Kaguya mildly teasing Daichi and him ending masturbating during night.
The first chapter featured her literally recording him jerking off. Then there was the thing at the well, off the top of my head. I feel like if a dick is out, and being used, I should be able to see it without several layers of people and/or sheets in the way. Not that I'm eager to see a guy jerking off, but by the time you're doing sex stuff on screen, you clearly want to make porn, and I encourage you to do it instead of blueballing us both like this.
Now we have actual porn....sure, there's no nudity and actual sex, but Kaguya made Daichi ejaculate multiple times with the intention of doing it. I feel that's more than just erotica
Strangely enough, the literal blowjob was fine... until it showed up on screen too the next chapter. I'm perfectly willing to tolerate people banging off screen. Author should have committed to that bit.
About the pool censoring...that was chapter 53 and I don't seem to remember censoring his fluids after that, so I guess it was like a sort of comic relief.
It was the single most confusing thing I saw in this entire series, since it literally looked like he took a shit on her head.
But I don't understand the last part: "all we got"....we never had anything else other than a "tease", never a full shot of nude genitals. It took you a second reading to realize she touched herself?
As in, it failed even to tease, since it was a single panel, with her hand mostly hidden away, at the exact bottom. The only indication that anything was amiss was the tiny bit of sweat, and maybe the feet crossing. The latter could (And I did) be taken as her just getting comfortable in bed. The tiny beads of sweat on her hand were the only definitive indication that her grip had changed. Like all the other instances of this in the manga, it was happening right at the very edge of the panel (This time in it, thankfully), you easily miss it if you're not analyzing every last pixel, and the author, once again, would literally have been better off making porn.
 
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The first chapter featured her literally recording him jerking off. Then there was the thing at the well, off the top of my head. I feel like if a dick is out, and being used, I should be able to see it without several layers of people and/or sheets in the way. Not that I'm eager to see a guy jerking off, but by the time you're doing sex stuff on screen, you clearly want to make porn, and I encourage you to do it instead of blueballing us both like this.

Strangely enough, the literal blowjob was fine... until it showed up on screen too the next chapter. I'm perfectly willing to tolerate people banging off screen. Author should have committed to that bit.

It was the single most confusing thing I saw in this entire series, since it literally looked like he took a shit on her head.

As in, it failed even to tease, since it was a single panel, with her hand mostly hidden away, at the exact bottom. The only indication that anything was amiss was the tiny bit of sweat, and maybe the feet crossing. The latter could (And I did) be taken as her just getting comfortable in bed. The tiny beads of sweat on her hand were the only definitive indication that her grip had changed. Like all the other instances of this in the manga, it was happening right at the very edge of the panel (This time in it, thankfully), you easily miss it if you're not analyzing every last pixel, and the author, once again, would literally have been better off making porn.
No but, I agree when you say that the covering (that you have all rights to consider censoring) is weird. I mean, he literally leaks like a faucet and that is showed clearly...at that point, as you rightly say, if you have to show me precum oozing from the tent of his boner, whether it's his pants or sheets, if he's getting a handy or a footy, just show me
I think I understand better what you meant: author is drawing porn but like keeping it 16+ rather than 18+ lol

For the mosaic censor, yeah, it indeed looked like poop, that's why I said it could be like a small comic relief
About this last Kaguya part, I don't know what to say....maybe I'm beyond being a degenerate, maybe I followed better the flow of the event, but first thing I thought was "she's masturbating remembering Daichi squeezed between her thigh and the hickey he left by kissing and sucking/suckling/biting them"
 
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I think I understand better what you meant: author is drawing porn but like keeping it 16+ rather than 18+ lol
We're basically on the same page. But I'm going to keep going, because I've been thinking about this for literal months, and you're the only guy I've been able to talk to about it. I'm sorry.

Sexual content is on a spectrum from Wholesome, to Porn, and every work falls somewhere in that spectrum. There's a special zone past "suggestive" where realistically, you should either dial it back, or make porn. Works can fall on either side of that line, and I know you've felt this before. Nukenai Seiken, for example, falls in the "dial it back" category, except for that one sequence in page 5, where suddenly we have literal, and metaphorical, grinding. (I've only read up to Vol. 2). Then there's this one...

And yeah, the line between "Dial it back" and "Make porn" seems to be "Are they doing sex stuff on screen?"

About this last Kaguya part, I don't know what to say....maybe I'm beyond being a degenerate, maybe I followed better the flow of the event, but first thing I thought was "she's masturbating remembering Daichi squeezed between her thigh and the hickey he left by kissing and sucking/suckling/biting them"
I'm a class 10 coomer myself; it barely registered for me. There's just not very much real estate dedicated to actually showing me what's happening, and I like to keep my assumptions in general to a minimum. Just an extra panel or something would have been helpful instead of just cutting to an abstract shot of her lips.
 
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