Party kara Tsuihou Sareta Sono Chiyushi, Jitsu wa Saikyou Nitsuki - Vol. 3 Ch. 12

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Huh, everything was going well like they planned which I really liked (I'm just a fan of good teamwork), but then Zieg had to suddenly get knocked out just so Raust can deal the killing blow? Come on. The writing feels insecure about Raust being the protagonist if he absolutely has to deal the finishing blow for every fight... Zieg barely even did anything after slashing that initial fireball. Was the author afraid Zieg would outshine Raust if he also did his job well?

Anyway, it's cute how Narsena comes to Laila for love advice (even if she can't actually provide that much). I love seeing major characters getting along even without the male lead there, it just feels more natural that way... and less "the world completely revolves around the OP protagonist so he has to be directly involved in anything and everything" kind of thing that stories with OP protags tend to struggle with.
 

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