Please Bully Me, Miss Villainess!

[CloudMain]

Characters with a good slow burn relationship and a tasteful seggs scene where the lesbians, as they say, hit that sh*t clean as all hell? That sh*t was smooooooth....

Frick yeah my brother we're going all in on this yuri series. Break the laws of the MFing world while you're blowing her back out girliepop.

Keep it coming and keep it coming yeah?

Also I better see BOTH of them preganté by the end of it. Twins because you have double the available equipment is based and sex-pilled as all hell.

 

[Renedemi]

The pacing is definitely slowwwwwwwwww but the pay-off for sticking around is very good. After 100 chapters or so they can finally be honest with themselves... The problem is that the story has to be interesting or entertaining enough to actually make you get through those chapters. Which, I would say is like a 50/50.

It's a Villainess manhwa with a game-like system that punishes or rewards the player depending on what they do... it's definitely not the most interesting or unique premise ever. In fact, the only reason why I even gave this a chance is because of the high rating, and the comments from this thread seemingly having almost no problems with it.

I think the biggest gripe I have is that the Villainess System is completely fucking ridiculous to me. It's not really explained on how it operates, and it just feels like it appears whenever the author desires to move the story forward. It feels REALLY forced at times, like the time Yvonne was forced to cut Elsa. The only thing I can hypothesize is that it activates when Yvonne is near Elsa. But if that was the case, then it should be ALWAYS triggering. It really makes it feel like everything is just happening because it NEEDS to happen, and not in some kind natural way that can be explained.

The story itself is nice. While the beginning does feel bland to me, imo the later chapters with the stuff like the time skip and past versions intrigue me. I will say though, is that the conflicts feel like they get resolved too quickly. Like that time Yvonne lashed out at Elsa to get away from her to get Elsa away. After she said all that stuff, they make up literally the next chapter after it happened. I thought to myself, "Well that was quick, why tf did that even need to happen? It literally went nowhere."

Many of the side characters quite frankly feel a little unused to me, like Sister Dahila or the personal maid. I couldn't really feel anything when seeing them, because it's not like they have much screentime or anything significant. The only exception to this is the "True" Elsa for me, but that's about it. It's hard for me to care about the side characters, even with characters like Olivia who should technically have a significant role.

The main characters though? I like them very much. It can get a little infuriating at times watching them doubt themselves for like the millionth time, but it's not like it's nonsensical, or that I don't get why. I think that the slow growth of their nature and trust in each other are endearing.

The art is very good. That's the one thing that I can say for sure it excels at. It is absolutely superb. Insert other synonyms for good.

Anyway just give it a try. I don't FULLY recommend it, but it's definitely something that can catch your eye.

 

[InfiniteDivine]

Omg, yes! I know of no other Yuri story where in that universe it’s possible for the lesbian couple to conceive a child together, aside from some crazy hęņțæī stuff, which I don’t doubt is out there. So, I’m REALLY hoping this happens in the future of this story in a very tasteful and engaging way that feels natural to the story. I mean, just the thought of them carrying each other’s child together, birthing together, and raising their little ones together, it just makes my heart feel full in a way I can’t properly convey.

 

[InfiniteDivine]

I’ve gotten pretty heavily invested into many different series, but as someone with ADHD, I eventually either get bored of most of them, or even forget about them (unintentionally on the forgetting obviously). HOWEVER, not with this one. I’ve never been so invested in a series that I’m constantly checking for new chapters almost daily, even after this long.

I love yuri romance stories, and this one is without a doubt top tier. I’ve noticed some people say that it’s slow for the relationship to develop, but I say that’s what makes this perfect! It’s slow, but not so slow that you lose interest, it gives you just enough to keep you invested and wondering what will happen next. At least for me, each chapter ends in a way that leaves me needing to know more. And I think that’s because real relationships (especially the ones that last) normally take time to forge, and out of those some of them take even longer for the couple to get to “that” point (you know what I mean, nudge nudge wink wink). And that’s one of the things I love about this series, it takes quite some time for the relationship to get to that very intimate part, and when it does, boy howdy does it take off. Although, and this may be the lewd person in me talking, if I were to complain about anything so far, which I only have one and it’s not even really a complaint, that one thing would be I wish we got to SEE more of that first intimate moment between them. Don’t misunderstand me, it was definitely well done, but it did feel cut short and leaving me wanting to see more.

Above all else, there is one thing that I want to happen in this series. No real spoilers, but at one point there’s a conversation that basically states that through magic, two women could have a child together. Therefore I am praying, PRAYING, to the god/creator of their universe, the amazing Chise, Ciweimao (刺猬猫), that these two eventually make a family together. I don’t care when or how it gets to that point, just that it does. There’s two reasons for this:
The first is, to my limited knowledge, it’s never been done before and would be breaking new ground.
The second, the thought of them carrying each other’s child at the same time makes me “squee” for joy on the inside. It would also make for an exciting and beautiful addition to the story!

Thank you for this amazing story and please continue to do your best! You have my support!