Pokémon Special - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - VS Mew

[MangaDex]

 

[biznizz]

While I appreciate you having a higher quality scan, I have to say this:

1. If this is in English, just use the English names. If nothing else, just use the English Pokemon names. The average person will not care about your authenticity in using the original unlocalized names.

2. The overuse of translator notes. It's one thing to explain that Masara is the OG name for Pallet, but it is not necessary to explain what -chan suffix means. And, if you do, put them in a page at the end of your chapter so you aren't cluttering the borders/gutters of the panels.

3. Please be mindful of the way you typeset.

RES
ISTS

does not look good. I'm sure it was done that way to cover up the Japanese SFX onomatopoeia, but you need to either put it on one vertical line, or at least give it a dash to imply its one word.

RES-
ISTS

 

[GeographicalNonsense]

Okay, I'll remake it. Soon I'll post a "read it again" comment.

 

[KeepItUpPls]

@GeographicalNonsense

Mate: I just made this account to tell you that your translation and non-localization of pokéspe is very, very welcomed and I'm hyped for this project you're venturing on! Specially for us that are the niche-of-the-niche, and like to consume our media as pure and closest to its source material.

Thank you! And please don't take that "jUsT cAlL iT cHaRmAnDeR" the other user mentioned to heart (but yeah, you gotta CON-
NECT these words, man).

Translator notes are fine where they are: Words need context, and we need it now! for example:

"* hitokage=charmander"

Stay true to your own vision and good luck!

Looking forward for more chapters~

 

[GeographicalNonsense]

Look at the following message I sent, this one's content - which is the same as the one below, has been deleted.

 

[GeographicalNonsense]

@GeographicalNonsense

Mate: I just made this account to tell you that your translation and non-localization of pokéspe is very, very welcomed and I'm hyped for this project you're venturing on! Specially for us that are the niche-of-the-niche, and like to consume our media as pure and closest to its source material.

Thank you! And please don't take that "jUsT cAlL iT cHaRmAnDeR" the other user mentioned to heart (but yeah, you gotta CON-
NECT these words, man).

Translator notes are fine where they are: Words need context, and we need it now! for example:

"* hitokage=charmander"

Stay true to your own vision and good luck!

Looking forward for more chapters~

Hm, so what could I do, @KeepItUpPls ? Because it's in the rules to not make two versions of the same chapter unless they are tagged with (Censored) or (Uncensored).