Greatly appreciated. I may take one of those edits if you don't mind. After chapter 23 I'll need to scan in and clean volume 7 so it'll be a couple days drought possibly. But I'm hoping to get it all caught up soon. I want to start reading the most recent arc myself but I'm still trying to decide if I wanna import champion itself.Still really good effort and impressive turn around time on chapters.
Only really 1 note:
1.) Definitely always re-read over a speech bubble maybe even read the whole chapter after you finish to see if there's any awkward spots where the flow is interrupted or where you could just improve the structure of a piece of dialog.
Ex:
Original- "This is no time for us to fight with each other!"
Instead could be- "This isn't the time for us to be fighting eachother!"
You could also use an Idiom like, "This isn't the time for use to be at eachother's throats!"
Other than that the center alignment looks great and the font sizing is way better! Great hustle man, keep it up.
Sex or breeding dungeon or some shit happening there? Maybe just human trafficking.
Human sacrifice. Typical of horror plot
I guess dude was just doing what the islanders were doing, I was expecting criminal-ish rather than just human sacrifice islander plot
Human sacrifice. Typical of horror plot