Psycho × Past - Ryouki Satsujin Sennyuu Sousa - Vol. 6 Ch. 22 - Letter

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Yeah, so the islanders were obviously bad, but I didn’t expect the male friend to be in on it. It makes sense, though; he must be the one in charge of bringing in girls for whatever it is they were doing.

I’m guessing the soldier had his mind addled by drugs or something? I assumed that the islanders were cultivating some kind of drug, maybe a psychedelic that ruined the soldier’s mind, and all he remembers now is that the islanders are evil people.
 
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thanks for the chapter!

lol didn't this detective fall for the ol drugged drink trick in an earlier case? really n*bba?
 
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Still really good effort and impressive turn around time on chapters.
Only really 1 note:
1.) Definitely always re-read over a speech bubble maybe even read the whole chapter after you finish to see if there's any awkward spots where the flow is interrupted or where you could just improve the structure of a piece of dialog.
Ex:
Original- "This is no time for us to fight with each other!"
Instead could be- "This isn't the time for us to be fighting eachother!"
You could also use an Idiom like, "This isn't the time for use to be at eachother's throats!"

Other than that the center alignment looks great and the font sizing is way better! Great hustle man, keep it up.
 
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Thank you so much for the chapter!!!!! Can't wait to see the conclusion. (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡
 
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Still really good effort and impressive turn around time on chapters.
Only really 1 note:
1.) Definitely always re-read over a speech bubble maybe even read the whole chapter after you finish to see if there's any awkward spots where the flow is interrupted or where you could just improve the structure of a piece of dialog.
Ex:
Original- "This is no time for us to fight with each other!"
Instead could be- "This isn't the time for us to be fighting eachother!"
You could also use an Idiom like, "This isn't the time for use to be at eachother's throats!"

Other than that the center alignment looks great and the font sizing is way better! Great hustle man, keep it up.
Greatly appreciated. I may take one of those edits if you don't mind. After chapter 23 I'll need to scan in and clean volume 7 so it'll be a couple days drought possibly. But I'm hoping to get it all caught up soon. I want to start reading the most recent arc myself but I'm still trying to decide if I wanna import champion itself.
 
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Thanks for the tl, this series is soo good and if its not for the silence of the lambs early case then maybe it might get adapted 😂
 

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