Puppet - Vol. 2 Ch. 6 - Suspicion

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The core problem i have with leaves as a character is how he doesn't fit with a story telling, he figures things out just to commit the same mistakes, while that is a acceptable behaviour for a kid, it hurts the story by stalling it, we don't wanna see a discovery channel episode about child behaviour we wanna read a horror story about Pinocchio
 
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The core problem i have with leaves as a character is how he doesn't fit with a story telling, he figures things out just to commit the same mistakes, while that is a acceptable behaviour for a kid, it hurts the story by stalling it, we don't wanna see a discovery channel episode about child behaviour we wanna read a horror story about Pinocchio
If you want that kind of story about Pinocchio, just look up meat canyon pinocchio. This is a different genre
 
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I GOT IT
she's the second and most treasured daughter. The first must have been killed an the soul transferred over!
 

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