Qíngxù Bìng - Ch. 1 - Contagion

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Im not a writer and won't act like im an expert but even I can tell this sucks. Exposition dumping like such is a big giveaway that the work probably won't be good. the translation is great and the art is very good but everything else is bad.
 
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Holy fucck, I actually got hit by the twist. I was so confused by the low quality that I couldn't even begin to fathom that it was actually a setup. Making the MC schizo and then having the imagined being info dump was such a crazy move. My mind is actually blown and I am having a very difficult time comprehending everything and deciding whather this is actually good or not. It feels really funny.
 

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