【Re: united】is finally published on NamiComi!

[ZodiacWitch]

After 2+ years of hard working I finally published it! it's an adventure fantasy genre manga!

In a world torn between the Sky and the Lands, siblings Mia and Sera embark on a quest to reunite with the only family they have ever known—Mother Theresa. Separated by fate, their journey is filled with surprises, wonder, and sorrow. As they traverse breathtaking landscapes and encounter both friends and foes, they must confront their deepest fears, discover the power of love and hope, and learn to believe in themselves. Yet hidden within Mia lies a secret that could change their fate—and the fate of the entire world.

Happy reading!

(1/3) of Episode 1

 

[solstice258]

The art and paneling is very good! I got kinda confused by the events and timeline though

And, my opinions on Namicomi's reader still hasn't changed, but that's unrelated.

 

[ZodiacWitch]

The art and paneling is very good! I got kinda confused by the events and timeline though

And, my opinions on Namicomi's reader still hasn't changed, but that's unrelated.

thanks.
I do want to know which part got you confused. I want to work on my flaws so episode 2 will be better.
also what's your opinion on NC reader?

 

[solstice258]

thanks.
I do want to know which part got you confused. I want to work on my flaws so episode 2 will be better.
also what's your opinion on NC reader?

Generally the stuff towards the end of the chapter was confusing- who are these people battling and why? It might make sense in your head since you're the creator but there's not much context for the reader.
Still, this is just the 1st chapter and you may be planning to explain them later on (^^)

My problem with the reader is it's too mobile-centric, even the desktop reader, why can't I use the scroll wheel to scroll, or have the page's default zoom be more than 100% ?

 

[ZodiacWitch]

I see. thank you for your feed back I will pay more attention and think how a new reader would see my story when I work on the next episode!
about the NC mobile-centric you can perhaps as the devs about it in the nc discord. they're very approachable.