Reborn as a Phoenix: A Normal Bird Can't Beat a Dragon, Right? - Ch. 2

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Thanks for the translation!

The premise is fantastic, but the writing has been pretty bad so far. The author needs to just tell the story in chronological order, you can't just keep jumping around leaving a trail of cliffhangers in your wake. Especially when it could be weeks or months between chapters and I have no memory of who these people even are.
 
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Thanks for reading! Hopefully the flashbacks don't put you off too much. It's only for a bit, so stay tuned!
The rest of the released chapters are being worked on, with the next raw coming out early November as far as I know.
 
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Ugh, why did it have to do the flashback immediately after the first chapter?
 
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....why do I see Avenger's font for an SFX there?? 😂 No wonder it feels weird seeing some random arrow inside a letter!

Anyway, thanks for the chapter, LHScans!!
 
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I've been reading the WN of this with google translate, and the manga is actually presenting things in a different order. In the WN the mc dies, then goes right into the 'i woke up as a bird' bit. They probably went forwards then back to have the heroine appear in the first chapter, a trend that happens a lot.
 
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@Kurogwane Yea, I'm aware. But you need to give readers a couple of chapters after you initially hook them before you throw the "explanatory flashback" in if you don't want to drive them away.
 

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