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What happened to the beaten girls’ slaves?
Commenting to come back to read this later when I start the mangaWhy Mc shouldn't have won any of the fights:
Fight one: if backstep can be used infinitely with no cooldown then his opponent is basically immortal as any attack the Mc uses would be dodged. The opponent could just wear the Mc out because she's stronger so she has more stamina.
Fight 2: money for preparation aside, Mc has no way of keeping that candy in his mouth after getting punched and knocking the wind out of him from his back slamming against a wall as well. He was punched with so much force that spit was spilling out of his mouth, anyone could assume there's nothing held in his mouth. Not sure how physics works but he could have easily ended up accidentally swallowing the candy or spitting it out from the force of her punch. Not to mention, he doesn't have guarantees that she'd grab him by his neck. Or that his spit could hit. Just that she likes to break joints. Unless his psychoanalysis was so good that he can predict her every behavior his plan has like, no way of working.
Fight 3: Mc should not be able to practise the skill on himself because the area demonstrated can not even span half his body.his opponent's skill is 2 meters cubed but his training partner's skill, even if it's 1 metre, would fail to work as 50 cm would mean his upper body only maximum. Any practise with teleporting himself would just result in him passing out from blood loss because he's lost half his body, which contains half his blood. His gamble was foolish at best and fatal if he wasn't the Mc.
Oh hell no oh hell no he better not or i will hate gay moreI'm here for the moment when the protagonist has to fuck an ex-man.
Nothing wrong with feeling like the character isn't likable but this isn't really Redo The Healer on steroids lol. It also isn't really an example of an OP main character.Redo The Healer on Steroids plus Isekai and OP MC cliche. I swear mangakas can't write a "likeable" r*pist unless they appeal to the degen audience
The author was so close to greatness. A hentai with a decent plot...and then he forgot to include the hentai.Lmao, what's the point in making your work all about sex, literally all of it, and then not have ANY sex scenes? I'm baffled. And the 3.5 or w/e chapters which ppl said are the sex scenes, are just 3 sketches of pretty much nothing. Seems like a pointless work honestly, as neither the mc or the setting aren't really interesting, was somewhat interested in the story, but it literally crashed and burned the same first chapter.
For a work which premise sets up to pretty much be porn, it even fails at that, don't know what else to say
Just go read Hentai, and it will have better plot and setting than this. And you'll get to spank your monkey in-between