Rewriting My Third Life - Ch. 20

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It shouldn't take several chapters just to meet an information guild. There's been way too much banter about it without any resolution. Nobody likes being strung along by an unnecessarily added, messy, tangenting subplot. One subplot at a time, please (since the writer doesn't seem to have the skill to storytell multiple subplots properly).
 

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