Rewriting My Third Life - Ch. 9

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so the maid lady said "there's probably gonna be a war in the future, let's set off a bomb next to this 6 month old baby, that's a great way to turn this >6 month old baby< into a soldier"?
kinda sounds like she should be fired on the spot, yeah?
 
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so the maid lady said "there's probably gonna be a war in the future, let's set off a bomb next to this 6 month old baby, that's a great way to turn this >6 month old baby< into a soldier"?
kinda sounds like she should be fired on the spot, yeah?
Honestly I feel like she's skirting by because MC's dad is irresponsible.

Literally most people would be able to assert that they were better and more responsible than her re: kids, but with him she can be like, "Remember how I had to badger you to name your baby?" "Remember how you didn't talk to your other daughter for years because you felt awkward?" "Remember how you didn't notice her butler was obviously evil?"
 
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Honestly I feel like she's skirting by because MC's dad is irresponsible.

Literally most people would be able to assert that they were better and more responsible than her re: kids, but with him she can be like, "Remember how I had to badger you to name your baby?" "Remember how you didn't talk to your other daughter for years because you felt awkward?" "Remember how you didn't notice her butler was obviously evil?"
lmao the dad is so ass at being a father that she can convince him that trying to kill his kid isn't a big deal.
 
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yall talk as if there's no issue with the basic premise - Laviens are the best force against the demon lords, and Bless is supposed to be "da hero" so she has to grow up strong. And then they chuck a live grenade into the crib and hope for the best. "She'll overcome it or she'll die" - great gamble. And it's not even confirmed the demon lord will awaken. So if he doesn't awaken, you're just risking a life for nothing, if he does, you're risking the only way to fight him. Not a great plan.

Honestly, not a pleasant read so far, the writer is dropping in too many plot threads too quickly. It's ok to let things develop, you don't have to build a whole world of intrigue instantly.
 

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