Thanks for the translation
I do feel bad for the original girl, but she brought t upon herself, if she would have just said sorry just the day after he was almost killed, it would have save them this shit, but well dump second FMC.
The premise is good. I thought it will be another Arifureta but it is different.
I hope they won't cut short any development here. It will be good for Hyce and Sasha.
And I hope author won't put any main girl. Sasha as the end girl is totally okay but the story build up must be neat and not too edgy and childish like this.
Maybe it's just me but.
1. Who really cares if "that cringe shit wouldn't pass in real life" it's fiction. As long as it convey the message properly (which it did, that he doesn't want anything to do with her) then it should be fine.
2. You would be absolutely correct about making her work to be in the mc life again. However that only applies if the mc wants her to be in his life. He doesn't, that's the point. He's not afraid of "what if she moves on" cause to him she has already "moved on" when she kicked him out of the party and left him to die (tho not intentional). Like he's not some tsundere that secretly wants her to "notice me senpai". He actually hates her fr fr.
3. And as cliché as this goes. Him ignoring her is "needed" for both the mc as a character to have something to work to or work against (either by proving her wrong or for teconciliation). And for her to as you describe to work for the right to be in his life again. We're starting from less than zero it can only go either way in which him hating her is needed.