S-Rank Party wo Munou da to Tsuihousareta kedo, "Kantei" to "Chiyu Mahou" de Nariagari Musou - Ch. 16

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Proofreading by Sauron, but no listed Quality Checker. They really need one for every project.
 
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If the west sage truly is a sage, she should know how to trick Elad trough the kid.
 
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If the west sage truly is a sage, she should know how to trick Elad trough the kid.
Assuming of course she's not in cahoots with Elan herself. Because if she is, they've just accomplished what they're aiming for. The villains that is...
 
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This is the part where they were conveniently followed, no?
Or the sage turns out to be a bad guy, who planted a neutralizing crest in an adventurer to conveniently show up just as she had "explained" things sufficiently to mc, and schemes to get altera to break the barrier blocking her from accessing the library, and want the crest for herself.
 
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Elad: Thanks for that!
swoops in and ganks the über seal, gloats for 5 chapters, and gradually dies over 17 chapters of not-quite-content

Also, you say you're recruiting proofreaders?
Really?
Great idea.
Cos... damn.
 
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Not gonna sugarcoat it, but the MC's group just opened the way for Elad to also have access to the library.
 
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@alphamine and KS Group

I'm here a year later to re-read and catch up on the story, and this is still a pretty terrible chapter.

If your group has time to do multiple chapters and stories, maybe consider NOT doing a completely shit job on the translation?

I mean, sometimes your TL doesn't suck; but, I'm afraid this one is typical of your group.

Ultimately, I don't know how many times or how many people need to say it, but I'll give it another try...

HEAL

To Heal, or Healing, is the process of repair and regeneration of damaged organic tissue.

HEEL

The heel is the prominence at the posterior end of the foot. It is based on the projection of one bone, the calcaneus or heel bone, behind the articulation of the bones of the lower leg.


Please, PLEASE, for the love of all things, learn the difference!
It's been YEARS!
By now, you must know the difference; it's one f*cking letter!

H - E - A - L

Layered Heal.
Every single time, the dude is using a spell called "Heal," and that spell is being layered.
He is not using his foot.
The story is literally about using the spell called "Heal."

Use the spell called "Clue" on yourself, and spell the fucking word correctly.
 

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