Saiaku no Avalon - Ch. 50

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"It's fine, I'm strong. I can even go up against an adult adventurer! Just like this, I'll beat everyone."

Gets shut down one page later. Now you've exposed your strength and accomplished nothing.

I will say, this turned out different to how it usually goes. Normally she would have been the star of the show, saving her classmates.

Unfortunately for though, she isn't the MC xD.
 
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There are some mistakes here.
Sorel is wrong it's Soleil there's already an official release by JNC and this clan name is Soleil.
kukuchi-san it's wrong too.
Golden Orchid Association is redundancy.
Colors is the largest dungeon conquering group, not the golden orchid.
(According to the plot they almost got destroyed by Oboro is are currently recovering their strength so they can't be the largest dungeon conquering clan)
 
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Another error: Suou is a man, not a girl. He may look feminine to some extent, but he is male for sure. In the final page, Akira calls him "Suou-kun" too

The idea among the classes is that "Colors" is the main "national" party, one that receives support from everyone pretty much

Among the main members of Colors, each one represents a color (Leader is Red, there is Blue, and so on).
The Golden Orchid Clan would be associated with one of these colors, so it's a 2nd level party.
Soreil is a 3rd level, as in, they are related to the Golden Orchid Clan, but not directly with Colors, but you could argue there is a connection.
However, they are not the only parties related to Colors, there are many 2nd level parties related to Colors, and there are even more 3rd level parties that are related to tehse 2nd level ones.
 
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This story is starting to piss me off ngl. Why is everyone so passive?
Agree, the character in the story is sooo moronic and can't be reasoned with.

-Let go the bad guy and then got beaten by the same bad guy minutes later
-Tue maid & butler cultist is annoying
-The higher class think it's an honor to server them???
-The MC keep hiding his power, never help his class at all, and actually responsible for the whole scenario

To top it off, everyone is drawn nicely but MC body proportion is sooo WEIRD it's like he is a custom mod character or something. (His head can fit 4-5 normal people's head but no one in that world thinks it's weird)
 

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