Saikyou Mahoushi no Inton Keikaku - Vol. 2 Ch. 7 - Determination

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story seems fine, but i hope the art will be pushed up some steps in future.
 
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You know that wide panel where he's showing off his mana like Hulk Hogan at a dick measuring contest? That panel sucks. A lot.

There is a way to make your characters look powerful while still maintaining a normal posture. It all comes down to posture and framing.

This dude looks like some dweebo spodmeister that collects Spiderman action figures. Not a battle-hardened soldier.

This is because it's using a zoomed-out, high-angle view that is usually for scanning complex scenes or making the subjects in the shot look weak and vulnerable. I remember this same camera angle from the last 2 episodes of Evangelion.

This scene would be infinitely cooler with a close-up, low-angle camera perspective. I mean, I don't have any degree in cinematography or anything, but I still get how it works in concept from just watching movies and tv. So how can these artists get it so wrong?
 

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