Saikyou Shoku <Ryukishi> Kara Shokyu Shoku <Hakobiya> Ni Nattano Ni, Naze Ka Yushatachi Kara Tayoraretemasu - Vol. 11 Ch. 44

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Not that the story have ever been all that stellar, but these last chapters feel very bloated with redundancy.
It definitely feels like they could speed up the pacing, the length of the chapters is nice, but it feels really padded with a lot of conversation. And then the conversation get repeated again in the next one...
 
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Yea, the story has been pretty much
Oh no we got trouble.
"Axel appears" I got this
"Impossible, this and that, it can't be done"
Axel does that
Everyone gets shocks and worships him
Repeat for last few arcs.

It is getting too boring. Might drop this for some time.
 
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I see now!
I now know where Furry Daisy will come from!
Some of those corrupted springs can change you, like in Ranma!
Daisy went into one and changed into furry!
:meguupog:
Imagine the muscle-brained dude went into another and got genderbent.
 

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