Saikyou Shoku <Ryukishi> Kara Shokyu Shoku <Hakobiya> Ni Nattano Ni, Naze Ka Yushatachi Kara Tayoraretemasu - Vol. 8 Ch. 30

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Needs a couple fixes. One panel has "Daughters", then the following calls them "Children". There's also "Fast Transport" and "Past Transport". Just going off memory, might be some more. Nonetheless, thanks for this chapter!
 
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Thank you for the chapter! I always appreciate how much effort you put into your translations! That being said, they're normally all of incredibly high quality, but this one feels like it needs a fair bit of work still. I'm not gonna mince words here, this chapter is pretty rough. Everything else you've done so far up until now though has been fantastic!
 
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Needs a couple fixes. One panel has "Daughters", then the following calls them "Children". There's also "Fast Transport" and "Past Transport". Just going off memory, might be some more. Nonetheless, thanks for this chapter!
Personally, I feel it needs a mountain of fixes. Just as if somebody switched around all the negatives in the first pages, inverting the meaning of half the phrases said.
 
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I have no idea what quality being denatured is supposed to mean. Did you mean deteriorated perhaps?
Denaturing only applies to proteins.
 
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Some pages were rough to understand, mostly the ones about "the going down" or somesuch. Maybe reviewing grammar rules would help. But otherwise, the majority of the translation is good.
 
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None, as far as I know. When I posted my comment, two pages were missing. Would someone imagine that subsequent correction of the upload would somehow erase my comment?
The previous version of the chapter had two pages missing. So I figured that this replacement had them from the start. I didn't expect you to be a dumbass incapable of explicitly saying 'ah no, the pages are now here'. My apologies, I will not overestimate you again.
 
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The previous version of the chapter had two pages missing. So I figured that this replacement had them from the start. I didn't expect you to be a dumbass incapable of explicitly saying 'ah no, the pages are now here'. My apologies, I will not overestimate you again.
Calling me a dumbass here is quite stupid of you. The chapter wasn't simply freshly uploaded; the database entry was revised, retaining the comment that I made when the pages were missing.

You options now are
  • apologize, or
  • retreat into a sullen silence, or
  • dig the hole deeper.
 
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I just realized that I don't care one bit about anything that is happening. It is so mnany speech bubbles in every page that there is no "want" to even see the resolution./\
 
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I just realized that I don't care one bit about anything that is happening. It is so many speech bubbles in every page that there is no "want" to even see the resolution./\
I don't mind lots of dialogue, but this series doesn't tell much story.
 
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Calling me a dumbass here is quite stupid of you. The chapter wasn't simply freshly uploaded; the database entry was revised, retaining the comment that I made when the pages were missing.

You options now are
  • apologize, or
  • retreat into a sullen silence, or
  • dig the hole deeper.
Never apologize. Dig on your heels and trudge through.
 
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I think we should talk about the past achieved properties of MC's bag.
It is wonderful if he could just carry the apples with his bag as it has an effect where the, uhm, properties or time of the ingredients are slow or stopped.
So the apple will have a better chance of being fresh than delivering it with the box.

I also wondered why is the MC aren't even using his enhanced sight/hearing skills in these past chapters that he could use to get a better feeling of the situations, but NO, the author simply implemented it for the past jokes.
i.e. Berzelia mops the floor with "I love master" and MC can see it using his enhanced sight...
Then later that previous chapters, Berzelia says "I love master" while MC was able to hear it completely while using his enhanced hearing. But at the end of the day, he can't use it simultaneously.

When the author should be focused on his courier abilities and not just having the ability of a courier to use his past job, it's annoying to see it!
 
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When the author should be focused on his courier abilities and not just having the ability of a courier to use his past job, it's annoying to see it!
I'd say his ability to fight a swarm of insects without disturbing his box of magic apples counts as a courier ability.

Still, I wonder if his ingredient transportation ability should be able to deal with transporting those apples.
 

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