Sakigake no Hana Miko - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Harutsubaki Part One

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The writing is quite annoying. I mean it is foreseeable... lucky ecchi moments, the characters characteristic, the interaction with the keeper. Not just the writing but also the elements in it.

I particularly hate that the author is making the main character do things blind as fuck. This mother fucker was told to not touch the katana. This mother fucker was also told to not be seen by the girls. This mother fucker is so deaf that he offered a hand to one of the girl when told to be hidden.

I guess this is why i love slice of life. They dont really play with annoying gimmick writing.
 

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