...Seems you are using the raw pages of magazine, not the volume pages.... Volume pages tends to have some correct panels of magazine panels.
Also, I see your typesetting skills have been improved (previous chapters are a disaster), but still there is missing the full stop. And for double spread pages, there is a program who can make joint the two pages as one.
In the pre-last pages (pages 18 and 20), the name Mutsuo Toi has been written as Rikio Bui, this is inconsistent.