Sengoku Youko - Vol. 4 Ch. 19 - Evil Swordsman

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[KatoShuu]

But whyyyyyyyyyy

 

[4V29LN0n]

Hi BoomerAang, what improvements did you make?

 

[pikokola]

@4V29LN0n
I guess he redraw a tiny portion which have Japanesse remaining on the first page (8th page on Milky's release)
I can't find any other changes other than deleting the extra/cover pages.

 

[AlexanderKoruga]

I did some re-drawings and fixed up some grammatical errors.

 

[AlexanderKoruga]

Stuff like "I accept to be eaten" into "I accept being eaten".

 

[AlexanderKoruga]

@pikokola I re-wrote a few sentences that didn't make sense. Stuff like "I have enough" and "I tie you to a rock and throw you to the sea". I forgot about the covers pages and I will edit them back in, once I figure out how to do that on Mangadex.

 

[4V29LN0n]

@AlexanderKoruga Do you plan to fix more chapters?

 

[AlexanderKoruga]

@4V29LN0n I plan to edit all of the Milky translations. This chapter had, what I consider, to be the more egregious grammatical errors of the Milky translated chapters, which is why I edited it first. The main idea is to edit the Milky translation to the quality of the Vexed Scans translation. If you have any suggestions on any Typesetting, Re-Drawing or Re-Writing that needs to be done, feel free to give constructive criticism on any of those matters.

 

[Seraphy]

Man, I had literally just finished rereading this series a week ago, and I had been thinking that it'd be nice for someone to come along and fix up the rough grammar of these early chapters. It kinds of makes getting through the first arc a bit of a slog almost. Thanks for your work!

 

[4V29LN0n]

@AlexanderKoruga Nope, no suggestion. Thank you for your work. It's one of my favorite manga.