Senki Survival Saga - Isekai no Unmei o Kaketa Mujintou Fujun Iseikouyuu - Ch. 9 - Guts can't defeat bacteria

[FearlessBlue]

Grammar is a bit off on some pages.

Sorry. Could you point it out, please?

 

[BanzaiYuri]

Almost too absurd

 

[DonHazzy]

Sorry. Could you point it out, please?

No idea about the grammar but there is text missing when he is giving her water

 

[Hussam4]

Bruh why is this manga so good? It feels illegal. Cant wait for next chapter

 

[FearlessBlue]

No idea about the grammar but there is text missing when he is giving her water

Fixed. Thanks 🙏

 

[mangasegs]

Fixed. Thanks 🙏

Thank you for the translation!

 

[Izaya_Onisai]

@FearlessBlue Thank you very very much for bringing us this gem~!
Without you I wouldn't even known it exists... so really thank you~!
And your translation staying true to the raws is really nice, hope you continue translating this and see you in the next chapter~ <3

 

[FearlessBlue]

@FearlessBlue Thank you very very much for bringing us this gem~!
Without you I wouldn't even known it exists... so really thank you~!
And your translation staying true to the raws is really nice, hope you continue translating this and see you in the next chapter~ <3

Glad you like it. Thank you too, for your kind words. I've been kinda busy lately and will probably get busier in the future but this kind of comment really motivates me to keep translating for y'all and it's just kinda fun tbh. See you next week ❤️

 

[anonymousthief]

Need an H version of this.

 

[colorlesseatstomboys]

Elf chan should look at it this way.
If Naga was the first person to meet him, and the Elf later, what would she think if he didn't decide to help her just based on Naga telling him to stop.

 

[Grim021]

It's Sea-men, isn't it?

 

[SilverSupreme]

Sorry. Could you point it out, please?

Page 1: “What the hell did happen!?” should be “What the hell happened?!”

Page 5: “We can’t just let her to die!” should be “We can’t just let her die!” or “We can’t just leave her to die!”

Page 5: The comma should go before “And then” rather than after.

Page 6: Unnecessary comma between “I will help” and “too”. It works for “hurts, huh” earlier on the page because “huh” is an interjection there.

Page 16: “Let’s move our body and look for it.” should be changed to “Let’s move our bodies and look for more.” or “Let’s get up and find more water.” which may be less literal but flows more naturally while being more clear about intent.

Page 18: The sentence structure should either be changed to be “, but resources became even tighter with the addition of an ill person…” or “, but - with the addition of an ill person - resources became even tighter…”

Page 19: “You can also tell it by” - “it” is unnecessary here and would only be correct if you said “you can tell someone’s temperature” rather than “you can tell if someone is hot” in the prior sentence. In the same panel, “touching it with your hand” should be “touching them with your hand” unless you specify that “it” means forehead.

There are some more minor things but those would simply be nitpicking.

Also… I wish that the chapter I decided to comment on wasn’t the porn chapter.

 

[exxeld]

some of these poses look awfully familiar

 

[Oofbruh]

the last time i came across a weakened "dragon" in a survival situation, i fed it narcotics and food for hours. it woke up enslaved

ARK survival evolved situation ahh