Serial Killer Isekai ni Oritatsu - Vol. 2 Ch. 5 - The Serial Killer and a new threat

[MangaDex]

 

[Ranzo]

While I think this translation is a huge step up from the others I have noticed a weird repetition that occasionally pops up in some of the dialogue
For example

Wouldn't it flow much better if it simply was "I wonder if it was a knight or a mage of a different county?"

 

[Sisiyoru]

Potential ally?

 

[Bloddrake]

Black knight x999999 lives.. is that the black knight from Monty Python?