Thanks for picking it up. But I have some suggestions.
Get a non-ESL proofreader, someone who's a native english speaker post on r/manga or r/scanlation on reddit or on the scanlation forum on here. Or use chatgpt to check your grammar again.
Upscale the pages and reduce noise, use waifu2x (select all images in the folder). Or any other upscaler and noise reduction software. Please use different fonts https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/type/fonts.html. Try to clean and redraw if possible. The guide I included has more resources on how to typeset. Find a CL/RD if you cant do it yourself on the same places I mentioned above. Remember to upscale raws before cleaning and typesetting.
And if you see double page spreads please combine them so it's one page, as per upload guidelines
After her transformation into half-shark form i observed her shoes in the bus stop, but no ripped panties. Does that mean she usually is going commando in her two-legged form, to not eat trough a bunch of underwear a day? Answers are needed.