I kinda just skimmed this and got confused. So I slowed down and I'm still slightly confused.
I mean I get the general gist of it. It's the synopsis, literally just grew up in a harsh environment, got a beast, got some prestige in battle, then got jailed, betrayed and got her beast stolen and tortured and then she died and went back in time.
But the way it paces forward through isn't very clean. It's very abrupt. It's not a clean speedrun basically. Maybe it's just the lack of visual indicators that we're moving forward here and there, and the sudden flashback? Event in between? What if idea that's in whose head because this could be from either perspective honestly? Eh... Well, at least the setup's done.
