Thanks for the scanlations! They're very clean. A question about the puns though: you've done great in making them match up, but are you replacing the drawings to match the puns or did the artist redo them?
So the two versions are made for the puns?
The slight changes in the dialogue strangely made her come off as a bit less of a psycho (also flowed better)
Having both the original and the official is pretty nice~ If this is on their Pixiv though, it would be nice to have a link to it, in the comments or otherwise