Shinimodori Koujo wa Kurikaesu Sekai o Owarasetai - Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[Fushiginiku]

I'm finding this story a little disjointed at this point. It's like pieces of various 'villainess' stories were just stitched together without too much thought as to whether they form a logical progression.

 

[lesseffective]

I'm finding this story a little disjointed at this point. It's like pieces of various 'villainess' stories were just stitched together without too much thought as to whether they form a logical progression.

It's so disjointed that the art for the first dealer was used at the end of page 28 when Zeke asked for a drink!

 

[Lucky]

I'm finding this story a little disjointed at this point. It's like pieces of various 'villainess' stories were just stitched together without too much thought as to whether they form a logical progression.

It definitely felt disjointed when the stoic, overly polite and analytically thinking heroine does a 'kyaa' like 4 times in a row, lol. I can't help but feel they're also piling on all the plot points at once.

 

[Elfteiroh]

It feels weird reading this…
I know that a lot of stuff happened in these 3 chapters, but it feels like nothing happened. There’s a lack of… drive?
… hard to pinpoint.
(I’m really not used to “complains” in comment like this, but I’m kinda lost on why I don’t like it. It’s like on the tip of my brain, but I can’t make that one last connection to figure it out. XD )

 

[looc64]

It definitely felt disjointed when the stoic, overly polite and analytically thinking heroine does a 'kyaa' like 4 times in a row, lol. I can't help but feel they're also piling on all the plot points at once.

It's also like, the blocking(?) is weird so it's sorta hard to get what they're doing physically.

Like what is he doing on page 26? Why are his eyes closed?