Shirotae no Kimi, Hanagasumi

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It feels like much ado about nothing.
Despite initial bemoaning about forbidden love, nobody really seriously tries to stand in their way for more than five minutes. And it's not really even all that clear why it was ostensibly forbidden, either.

In the end it's mostly about a cool guy and a cool girl, occasionally a little too "cool" to the point of vanity, kicking random ass and flirting like mad. I could only wish it had embraced itself as thus, rather than trying (in vain) to go for suspense and drama.
 
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It's cute and short. I would say outside of the story being extremely predictable from the summary, I don't feel like there was much character development. Needed a few chapters maybe??
 

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