Shokushu Majutsushi no Nariagari - Ch. 14 - Little Sister vs Older Sister

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Corrections for this chapter:

In page, 5, you misspelled attack.

In page 7, it should be "a wind" instead of "an wind"

In page 20, please add "be" between "should" & "thanking"
 
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What was authors goal here? There is no shot mc does not realize its illegal magic, so author just med him even dumber for no reason.
 

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