Shura no Hakoniwa - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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Chapter one was fine, but after that it's just kinda been lacking, I suppose fits it best. This truly feels more fitting for a monthly with 30+ pages per chapter, than I presume weekly with 20 or less.

And stop THROWING CHARACTERS AT US WHEN YOU'VE BARELY ESTABLISHED THE MAIN TWO!
 
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Also, I know I shouldn't even address this, since their weapons of choice are clearly for aesthetics, but you don't monster hunt with bloody sabres! Sure you'd give them good slices, but cutting them actually apart like shown, nah.
Give them bulkier swords and since they are supposedly super-human, why not proper monster hunting nonsense swords!

Or for once, the actual logical choice of (melee) weapons when it comes to hunting giant critters, spears or pole-arms!
The actual logical choice would be to just give them guns...
 
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Oi DIPSHIT YOUR HAND NEEDS TO BE ON THE HILT WHILE SHEATHED WHILE RUNNING OR YOUR BLADE WILL FAL- and she's gone, and it's gone...

Y'know usually you let the main characters breathe on their one for awhile before slowly introducing all the other characters, although I don't wanna judge too soon, I'm just saying I ain't got a read on any character... Accept maybe the one with two personalities that ones fun

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When the child soldier doesn't want to be a child soldier :shamihuh:
 

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