Silent Screams - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1 - Unseen Hands Part - 01

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Well, is not my genre, I was curious to read it merely because it seems the author himself posted it, I think it needs improvement, in terms of pacing, dialogue, art, the background look bare and stiff and the line in the character look rather uncertain and trembling.
Is certainly better than what I could draw, so good luck and keep on practising.
 
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new update? :pepehmm: will check later...

"sit on bed because sofa is wet.." i read that.. bust font so small 🔥 HHAHhhahha (nneed to zoom from PC)
:O well.. the door can be in different perspective 🤔
nice update
 
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Well, is not my genre, I was curious to read it merely because it seems the author himself posted it, I think it needs improvement, in terms of pacing, dialogue, art, the background look bare and stiff and the line in the character look rather uncertain and trembling.
Is certainly better than what I could draw, so good luck and keep on practising.
Thanks Septazia for you feedback 😃
 

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