Snow Thaw & Love Letter - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - Invisible Distance

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Okay hear me out
Fanclub is cringe and all
...but wouldn't we all be a part of it? Just look at her on page 22 :lewd:
 
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This school is full of lunatics.

Also, is this chapter eight or nine? The cover page says nine.
 
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ngl, that part with the fanclub cornering her and then the chase, it looks very poor, like, they're barely jogging, the distances between them don't make sense, etc etc
 
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This whole “prince” thing is definitely the weakest part of the story. I don’t know why authors keep doing this sort of thing; Giving one of their leads an entire fanclub that worships them… It makes it feel like every side-character’s life revolves around whatever the MC is doing, instead of having a world full of people with their own stuff going on.

I wonder if this is a case of allowing the fiction to be unduly influenced by the author/audience’s perspective. The main characters are important to us, the readers. They shouldn’t be all-important diegetically.

Or maybe it’s even simpler than that: The transparent wish-fulfillment of being popular and universally loved.
 

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