Um, I fear that I have to agree with the commentators, but in reality, I think that the author is to blame. GOD! STOP BEING SO MEAN! IT'S NOT GOOD TO GIVE JK ROWLING A RUN FOR HER MONEY IN WHO CAN TREAT THE FLUFFIES WORSE! [facepalm]
@Stoner @Poisondilu I have my suspicion s that they will not. Worse is how damn effective they are at plucking out folks and making fracking tragedies. Blarg. If it wasn't for the MC & Al wanting to end the world, I'd legit consider agreeing with Stoner on this. [Facepalm]
Edit: I'm still reading. I stopped when her family was murdered. Yeah, suspension of disbelief—annihilated. Legit, he's THIS evil? Mass-Murdering Megalomaniac chessmaster rapist Livi? Wow—I get wanting to make the princess redemptive, but this is now making me ship her with Nike & hoping this Livi dies a horrible death.
I'm going, "Is Bard going to slap him‽" I can only imagine what his mother would say/do—holy crap! Urg. She'd be, well, I would probably murder her. 😂 Frack! Like, while I'm not finished reading yet, I'm losing respect for Bard—WTF, BARD?! DO SOMETHING! GRAB YOUR PAIR & STOP LIVI! FRACK!
Gosh, can you imagine if No ACTUALLY saw this?
Woman, are you SURE he's changed? He's like a petulant evil child being evil for the ducks. Like some supergenious of evil doing evil for the lulz. It's like, I didn't realize LIVI turned into a psychopath—and you did NOTHING to stop his behavior Bard?!
[shakes head] All kuz he'd guilt you about his Mom when his own actions it would be the legit death of her.
That said—HOW did the kids die? That fractures my believability. Unless the parents killed them (which NEEDS to be illustrated if so), TOTALLY shattered my believability. Like, these are trained knights. HTF did they go NYPD on an unarmed black dude on the whole royal family including the kids? Makes NO sense. Plus, where were the guards? It was just them. It looks like the kids got killed, which again, makes no sense, so… I don't get it. Heh.
This one time, I feel like the author went too far and broke the suspension of disbelief. Bleh.
Second Edit: I legit have lost all respect for Bard at this point. He's seriously couldn't stand up to him? Is he really that weak of a character? Livi is NUTS and you let him run THAT rampent? Become THAT much of a tyrant? What would Sheila think of this, Bard‽
Bleh. Even if he's got life & death powers, SLAP HIS ASS (not literal: face, HARD, or spank him) & lecture him, use his Mom & GLOMP him, but DAMNIT, BARD! SHAME! Sheila… poor Sheila. Bard acted like a tool & Livi legit acted like a monsterous petulant child. Is this him totally spiralling from guilt at what happened to her family that he went full cray-cray to block his pain? If so, then even worse. That Bard even ATTEMPTED! [facepalm]
Urg. Amazing series & then… [facepalm]